Sunday, September 28, 2008

Sex Appeal

Completed - 1477 words


This one went well. I kind of thought that it would. If my time had not run out I could have gone much further with this scene. It was Ayrien stalking her kill. I only had enough time to put down how she got the guy, who is an absolute dork, to leave with her. He wasn't totally stupid. He thought she was just going to use him for something, like dealing drugs or just pumping him for money. But she used her assets to make him leave.

I'll have to write how she kills him and tortures him to get what she wants. Nothing overly graphic, just straight to the point. I probably could have written at least twice this length if I was just writing the whole entire scene this evening.

Well on to the next.

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